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 Post subject: Haiku
PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2014 5:09 pm 
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In case you don't already know about the form of Haiku poems, here are the rules:
Only three lines, and five syllables in the first and the third line, and seven syllables in the second line. There in no need for rhyming, but if you can make it rhyme it's an extra bonus.
Here are some of mine:

A bahro cried out
in a Teledahn prison
just when Shroomie shout


The trees in Kadish
reaches slowly for the sky
while leaves are falling


Up on the railing
overlooking Kerath's arch
I'm sometimes standing


In the orange glow
of numberous dropped pellets
the lake will light up


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Except for good old OHBot
Swinging 'round the pole

Always got our backs
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With some awesome hax

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If we're being technical, I'd wager every haiku here isn't really correct, as it's not syllables that you count, it's morae. They're like syllables, except you can have multiple morae per syllable. Here're some roughly conforming to the Japanese rules:

Once again
Stream in the Cleft
Begins to flow.

D'ni, the city
Of Ages died.
But now, breathes.

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And the first and third line should be a contrasting ‘image’ of sort, divided by an ‘action’.

the towering arch
light brushes the piers
algae glowing

hands that touch cloths
a rusty door opens
an empty garden

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Using the morae, the vowels í ay ee oy oo would count as two.

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